And asked to include these words within our 100 words:
Shadows
Carefully
Darkness
Clouds
Moon
We were trying to include different sentence starters and connectives in our writing. Take a look at some of our attempts below, or click kidblog (on the right hand side) to view more.
It was a dark gloomy night and I was walking down the street all by my self in darkness I could hear footsteps behind me smacking on the pavement .I looked up and I could see a full moon and see all the dark and glooming glowing clouds .I could see a shadow behind me I was shaking becouse I was really scared.I turned and walked to a shop I carefully opened a creaky ,dusty door then I went to the shelves. Suddenly I found load of mobiles I picked one up and took it to a counter I paid this old woman she had no voice I ran home.
By Annabel
I walked down a dark scarey Alleyway when I was seeing a gloomy shadow as black as black liquerice Then all of a sudden there was some grey clouds raining on the floor after there was a flash it was the Moon as bright as some headlights it looked amazing i carefully walked on. It started getting darker and Darker so i ran across the brick hard wall. There was bricks falling out of the flats I was worried it was going to hit me. This alleyway was starting to freak me out but at last I aventully got out out of the alley I was glad.
By Poppy
One night there was a man who was walking down a dark ally way and suddenly he herd howling so he turned around and there saw a lot of tall shadows. carefully he baked off but the shadows kept following him and the shadows faded into the clouds and the darkness rose into the ally. The moon faded and faded in till it was no longer to be seen but suddenly a hand reached on the moon the man was terrified by what was happening he did not now what was going so he quickly ran into a apartment.
By Lucy
I walked down a dark alley called darkness street the dark shadows where spooky black and grey. The moon was surrounded by spooky clouds. The smell of blood was in the air. I carefully walked down to one of the flats and I knocked on the door and a man opened the door and howled like a werewolf, because he was a changing into a werewolf and he said” get out of my house”. So I turned around and ran for my life so I would not get bit by him, suddenly a big gang of zombies chased me away out of darkness street. I would never go there again.
By Henry
As I carefully walked down the quiet street I saw these shadow’s behind me. I was so scared as the half moon shone above me like a car’s head light. The cloud’s where covering half of the moon but it was still so bright. The darkness of the night sky freaking me out a bit, while I was looking at the half moon the shadow’s came closer I was about to scream but when I let a squeak out someone covered my mouth it was a boy as soon as he un covered my mouth he ran of. I think he hid me . Ever since I am now afraid of the dark.
By Evie
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